SOLSC 13 of 31: Visible and Invisible

An empty bag

An empty water bottle

An empty toilet paper roll

An empty paper towel roll

all invisible to my son.

A pen, scissors, yesterday’s mail,

coupons, flyers, magazines to read.

Hand lotion, bills, notepads, cooking ingredients.

all visible to me.

But, I wish they were invisible.

4 Comments

  1. Anita Ferreri said,

    March 13, 2024 at 12:40 pm

    It’s like the pile on the stairs waiting to go up, no one else sees them!

  2. caroline524 said,

    March 13, 2024 at 5:03 pm

    I love the play with the visible and invisible. It almost sounds like you are writing about my house.

  3. lvahey said,

    March 13, 2024 at 11:59 pm

    You juxtaposed two people, and two lists, and two opposites words, in such a compact poem!

  4. March 14, 2024 at 2:47 am

    Oh, I love this. Simple and at the same time tells a story. All those items are also visible to me but invisible to my husband.


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